Sounds great! Couple boring parts but overall sounds good like on a holiday on beach or tropical island more like! 0:20-0:40 is best if there could be a vacation themed riser for start it would be great too! I like the electric jazz fukeh fell it has! Melody great! The song keeps you interested because it doesn't have the same thing over and over again. Good Job

Good remake it's not 5 stars just because it's a remake. Still requires a lot of effor to change very note into an 8 bit tone. I would say more to why it's good but the original is good by it'self 0:50-1:00 is so far the only part is bad. If you got a paino and went down on it without missing a key that's what it sounds like sounds like it's incomplete and glitchy other than that you did Pretty Good

Very baisic same thing over and over again and overall not too interesting. Melody is pretty bad none of the instruments fit together. Don't just get an idea for a song and try to fit it in no matter what. For now you should experiment with what fits together. Not a mastercomposer myself but i know some things about that. Now a lot of people will say it's bad but just don't give up not many people are here (right now) but if there was people like me would say it's bad. Add a drop or smth. Change the melody make it more interesting. Until I see one of your new audios I don't now how much you have improved. 1:54-2:16 is best because it's different